You had your heart in the right place.
This looked good in the loading sequences, but I was bitterly dissapointed.
The thing that really pissed me of was, you would take half an hour to walk down a street and go into a building, you would find nothing of use in that building. you would step into a street, hey presto your back at the beggining of the street again.
You really need to work harder on this if your wanting into the top 50. Its to slow, the different styles of illustration look bad together (although there were some good drawings in there). The sound clips should be made into decent loops and not suddenly stop and start again.
If I were you I would restart and brush everything up. This could be a great game, it has lots of potential.
Keep up the good work.
Later.
Z.oro.